Wednesday, 15 May 2013

My Society

Taking a stroll through the neighborhood, it reveals

A society that is continually shutting it doors,

 A society where liberated minds make you look on with awe,

 A society that only devalues and devour,

 A society that knows you more than you do know yourself,

A society that loves you when you satisfy their ego,

 A society that only gives you things you can never have,

A society that looks at you rather than look through you,

A society where many rulers abound with no clue,

 A society that detests members with a mind of their own,

A society that thrives on conflicts and animosity,

 A society trying to clone us without a prototype,

 A society that condemns you before trial,

 A society that can shut down at the push of a knob,

A society that is on the brink of an abyss,

A society that is hanging frail in its structure,

A society where peace has been broken into pieces,

A society where cause and effect has no correlation,

A society that always takes more than it gives,

 A society that uses, abuses and refuses,

My society; that society, is where I come from.

7 comments:

Anonymous said...

So what does that make you?

Fantaxy said...

I wouldn't know but the idea is to paint a picture of my society

Anonymous said...

datz Great

O'bEe said...

great 1 der..FanTaxy

Fantaxy said...

Thanks

Unknown said...

There's a lot to be said about the society especially the bad side of society.

My favourite line was:

"A society trying to clone us without a prototype"

I like that line because the society,most of the time,kills people's unique identities.
To me,one's unique identity is very vital to how one contributes to one's society.

Fantaxy said...

That's what happens when we refuse to think outside the box as a society